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How to Write a Public Comment That Shifts Policy

June 23, 20254 min read
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Have you ever wondered how programs in your community get funded?

Or ask yourself, do the people in Washington actually listen to everyday people like me before making decisions?

The answer is yes, but the key is knowing where to look and how to respond.

Every day, the U.S. federal government publishes proposed rules, funding priorities, and policy changes in a centralized public resource called the Federal Register. Many of these notices include a request for public comment—an open invitation for individuals, organizations, and communities to weigh in.

Submitting a public comment is one of the most direct ways you can influence federal decisions. It’s how everyday people bring their expertise, lived experience, and values into rooms where rules are written and funding is shaped. And once submitted, your comment becomes part of the official public record.

Whether you’re a grassroots leader, systems thinker, or everyday advocate, your voice belongs in that room.


Before You Write: Read, Analyze, and Strategize

Start by reading the notice thoroughly. These documents are part of the public record and include background on the issue, key questions the agency wants input on, and the rationale behind the proposed change.

Use tools like Speechify, Google Notebook, or ChatGPT to help process the document. These tools can assist you in:

  • Summarizing technical language

  • Identifying challenge questions

  • Creating outlines and strategic angles

Need extra guidance? This resource from Regulations.gov, the U.S. government's official portal for federal rulemaking, outlines what makes a public comment effective: specificity, relevance, evidence, and practical insight.

Your goal is to offer input that’s clear, grounded, and usable by agency staff reviewing the record.


Step 1: Start With the Solution

Lead with clarity. What action do you recommend that the agency takes?

Whether it’s piloting a new approach, updating a rule, or funding innovation, get to the point in the first few sentences. This helps agency staff and decision-makers quickly understand your contribution—and why they should keep reading.


Step 2: Ground Your Perspective

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Everyone brings a different lens. You can write from yours.

Before you write, reflect on your position:

  • What roles, experiences, or relationships shape your view?

  • What have you seen or done that gives you insight into this issue?

Grounding your comment in real-world perspective builds credibility and trust. You don’t need to speak for a group—you can write entirely from your own experience and expertise.


Step 3: Frame the Story, Then Layer the Stats

Policy change happens where story meets scale. Once you’ve named the solution and your stake in it:

  • Bring in the data

  • Use credible, current sources

  • Keep stats specific and relevant to your recommendation

Story without context can feel too narrow. Data without story can feel too abstract. Use both.


Step 4: Use Executive-Focused Structure

Most comments are reviewed first by policy staff who prepare summaries for senior decision-makers. To help yours stand out:

  • Start with your core recommendation

  • Follow with a real-world example

  • Back it up with relevant data

  • Close with your unique lens

This flow aligns with how agencies like CMS, HHS, and the Department of Education review public input.


Be Mindful: Your Comment Is Public Record

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Once submitted, your comment becomes part of the official federal record—and stays public indefinitely.

That’s a powerful opportunity, but also a responsibility. Speak from values. Share what you know. And make sure the tone, language, and framing reflect a position you’d stand by years from now.


Submitting Your Comment

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When you're ready to submit, start by visiting the Federal Register—the official daily publication for U.S. government rules, proposals, and public notices. Search for the issue you care about and open the notice to find full instructions.

Each notice will include details on how to submit your comment, including:

  • Submission deadlines

  • Preferred formats (PDF, Word, text box)

  • Multiple methods of submission—including by mail or online

Offering both mail and digital options helps ensure a wider range of people can weigh in—including those with limited internet access.

That said, Powered to Rise recommends digital submission when available. It’s efficient, trackable, and typically the most direct way to ensure your comment is received and recorded.

Once submitted, your comment becomes part of the public record—contributing your voice to the national policy conversation.


Final Thought

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When done well, public comments shape policy. They humanize systems. They build a record of what communities truly need—and who showed up to say so.

So if you’ve ever said, “Someone needs to fix this,” know that you can be part of that someone.

Start with what you see. Frame it with care. Back it up with data. And submit it with purpose.

Your voice belongs in the record. You deserve to be heard.

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Rafat is a strategic healthcare leader, policy advocate, and entrepreneur who moves with purpose. Grounded in Medicaid policy, public health strategy, and digital innovation, she equips community-rooted leaders to expand healthcare access, influence legislative outcomes, and create systems where everyone, especially those long overlooked, can rise.

Rafat Fields

Rafat is a strategic healthcare leader, policy advocate, and entrepreneur who moves with purpose. Grounded in Medicaid policy, public health strategy, and digital innovation, she equips community-rooted leaders to expand healthcare access, influence legislative outcomes, and create systems where everyone, especially those long overlooked, can rise.

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